I went back and did some basic painting on the Girl reactions page.
Musicians poster relaid out to go in, maybe, across from a story summary page. I added in a background, Jellybean's area, and Dr. Picklesniffer on tambourine and triangle. In future, I might go in and colour it up so it's a full illustration.
Illustrations and text explaining how the characters interact with each other will be helpful, as will more information about their likes and dislikes.
refined sketches that could go into pitch bible 002:
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| More moods and active poses for Girl |
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| Girl's outburst may require a "time out" in a straight jacket if Flash has anything to say about it. |
Jellybean rolled up. I made the executive decision to remove the tail from the sketch because it could be interpreted as "something else". If you can see the problem yourself, why not solve it right away? A series of Jellybean rolling up sketches would look good in the pitch bible...
I've decided to change Goldie's eyes to black almonds like the other characters. It'll solve the lack of expression problem that the meatballs have had and will bring design cohesion.
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