BSA228, clean flow chart and character concept art, 5 August, 2016

I've thrown out all the extraneous stuff and added two save points, but I'm not sure if this is tidy enough.  Is the game flow clear?

plain bunny and fox figures

cute bunny and fox figures

emo bunny and fox figures

 The game's target audience is pre-teens who shop at Hot Topic.  Emo bunny is testing very well in the video game room.  I'll rig her and fox will hang out as a "locked" character in the opening garden.