BDM125 Storyboarding- Step Outline Corrections

 The Step outline needs to be one page long and indicative of action and where dialogue happens.  Description shows up in later drafts.  These are the changes I made:  

EXT. PARK SQUARE-MORNING

A small, European park square separates an old brick building covered in graffiti and a gleaming art museum.  A teenager paints a mural of a painter Graffiti Girl.  Inside the museum, Artist Monkey resides on a canvas and paints.  A snobby museum patron stops to disapprove of the mural and chases off the teenager.  The Graffiti Girl opens her eyes and paints what she sees.

EXT. PARK SQUARE- MORNING

The Graffiti Girl and the Artist Monkey compare paintings through the window. 

INT. MUSEUM FOYER-AFTERNOON

The snobby museum patron demands that a painter be sent out to whitewash Graffiti Girl.

EXT. PARK SQUARE-AFTERNOON

The paint rises around Graffiti Girl’s legs and she calls for help.

INT. MUSEUM, CLASSICAL HALLWAY-AFTERNOON.

Artist Monkey resolves himself to do something and busts out of his frame.

INT. MUSEUM, HALLWAY-AFTERNOON

Artist Monkey flings himself from painting to painting, changing to fit in with the style of the paintings he’s traveling across. 

INT. MUSEUM, FOYER- AFTERNOON

There is no more paint to use to get outside. Artist Monkey leaps “into” the graphic t-shirt of a patron and rides out the doors.

EXT. STREET CAFÉ- AFTERNOON

Artist Monkey moves from the t-shirt to truck to window to yellow painted curb across the Graffiti Girl.

EXT. PARK SQUARE-AFTERNOON

The snobby museum patron brings out a super spray gun and Graffiti Girl is covered to her neck in paint.

EXT. STREET CAFÉ- AFTERNOON

Artist Monkey grabs crayons from a little girl at the café and colours himself across the street, looking like a kid’s drawing as he goes.

EXT. PARK SQUARE-LATE AFTERNOON

Graffiti Girl is covered in paint. Artist Monkey grabs the hydrant plug and sets off the water.  The snobby museum patron, painter and white paint are blown away and Graffiti Girl is free. 

EXT. PARK SQUARE- THE NEXT MORNING   

The painter and the snobby museum patron return to find a big gold frame around the Graffiti Girl and Artist Monkey and a crowd taking pictures of them.