The graphic novel contained each of the illustrated journal entries and left the wording intact. While it didn't have a traditional story flow, if you read each of the entries, the reader could follow that each entry had a subject and those subjects went from happy to sad to mad, etc. A story of sorts could be seen and followed. In the animation, no wording was retained; the images spoke for themselves. The movement and camera framing brought particular emphasis to each visual but there wasn't a progression from one emotion or visual to the next.
Once Deb finishes her song, I'll look at including her lyrics on the screen, or syncing visuals up to her vocals. The song could add a story back to the animation.
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