Here's the order of pages:
This keeps changing, which shouldn't surprise me, as pages get juggled around. It'll change again if I get those last two pages in.
I will go with this logline. Why not? Feedback will help sort out anything that needs sorting.
I put this in for Anna's benefit and kept it because why not? If the music is part of the show, it should be part of the pitch.
This may not be relevant to a pitch because the rendering style has changed from painting to collage, but it's good for showing relationships between the characters. At what point should I change that croc to a tuatara and the hamster to possum? Or is it even necessary?
I've added in sketches to fill the "dead space" above the bio. Since they weren't created specifically for that space, it's been a bit of a mission to get them all placed. Will get feedback on that.
I don't do much sketching with Flash and this group scene, while interesting, doesn't fit in with the motion studies of the rest. Should it be replaced? Or can I run with it? Maybe they'll all need interaction/relationship drawings.
These motions studies are good to have because they show Goldie's worry side.
Theoretically, this should be a two-page spread. We'll see after it prints if it was successful.
This emotion sheet used to be with girl on her beanbag but got moved down here in the shuffle. It works!
The placement of this last non-sequitur illustration may not work. Will get feedback.
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